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November 3 , 2005: Cameron School, Greeley, CO.

"Soft flute sounds filled the Library as Mary Peace Finley's presentation began. The students were hooked from the first flute echo to the last look and feel of the treasures on the display table! Cameron Elementary fourth and fifth grade students and teachers thoroughly enjoyed Mrs. Peace Finley's presentation last week. The only downside was the time was too short. We are hoping to have Mrs. Peace Finley back in the spring to do a "Writer's Workshop." Molly Darnell, Teacher

November 2 , 2005: Monfort Elementary School, Greeley, CO.

"Mary Peace Finley, a Colorado author, visited Monfort Elementary School on Wednesday, November 2. She read, played, and acted before our fourth and fifth grade students. Ms. Finley is an inspiration to all writers. Her choice of historical fiction is a true love for her. She has lived in many of the areas she writes about in her books. Her Sante Fe Trilogy is expressive and detailed. It is a series to be treasured by all readers. Ms. Finley is welcome back at our school anytime. Her presentations were excellent." Marsha Heineke, Teacher

November 2 , 2005: Meeker Elementary School, Greeley, CO.

"Students were enthused before you came about reading the 'Southwestern Trilogy'. They are now begging me to put your new book on my shelves when it comes out. My students are enthusiastic readers, but they have become even more excited as the result of your visit. Several have come up to me to show me references to things from your writing in their current chosen texts. Others have come to talk to me about your advice to authors and have related it to their own writing.

The children are helping me to choose the objects we will hang from our ceiling representing our readings of 'Soaring Eagle'and 'White Grizzly.' We are continuing to make our own necklaces with the 'devil's claw' seed pods we used for your key chain. They will have a constant reminder of your visit here. Several of my students have gone to special order your books at local bookstores. My copies of your works are flying off the shelves too.

On a more personal level, from the first soft notes on your Native American flute, you had my students in the palm of your hand. I appreciated your calm and calming demeanor. The children loved the artifacts that brought your trilogy to life. We continue to talk about the importance of research in the writing of fiction.

I hope to see you again soon, so that another class of children can benefit from your wisdom and enthusiasm for writing. You are also an inspiration to me--as a teacher and a writer.

Thank you for the wonderful experience. We hope you had a pleasant visit to our school and area."  Vicki Heisler, Teacher

November 2 , 2005: The following article first appeared on November 20, 2005 in the Forum section of the Greeley Tribune A-13; by Vicki Heisler, Meeker Elementary School, Greeley, CO.

"We have crammed 72 fifth-graders and six adults into my small classroom. We sit shoulder to shoulder on the carpeted floor, knees against the back of the person in front of us. And yet, the discomforts and confinements vanish as soon as soft strains of the flute are heard. The white-haired lady who stands before us plays a few more notes and quietly begins to speak.

We feel as if we know her, though most of us have never laid eyes on her before. We have studied her Website and read her books. We have drafted questions for her, and made drawings and mementos for her. Somehow, through an alchemy of paper and ink, she is our friend before we meet her.

She is Mary Peace Finley, author of a “Southwest Trilogy” that Colorado children cherish because it tells the story of our state so effectively.

Her books have been nominated several times for the Blue Spruce Award for children’s literature, and with the third book of her series, “Meadow Lark,” she has become the recipient of the Colorado Book Award. She is an accomplished author.

She is here under the auspices of the Weld County Council of the International Reading Association and our Meeker School Association parent group, which provided funds.

Mrs. Finley had visited our school once years before, but the children who met her then have grown up and moved to other schools. I am the only one who remembers her vividly. She was gracious enough to spend extra time at the end of a long and demanding day with fourth-graders after school. She likes their questions and their clear knowledge of her book. She read a chapter from her unpublished second book, “White Grizzly,” and asked for their feedback. And she offered professional advice when my students told her, “Our teacher has written a book!”

The same gracious spirit was much in evidence during this visit too, although now she is far more well-known and has published nine books.

At first, she seems very shy, but soon we see glimpses of the child inside---the explorer, the adventurer, the curious, eager wanderer who absorbs so much of the world around her and simply can’t resist telling about it.

She brings dozens of artifacts symbolic of her books—tea in blocks, the cheap cologne the mountain men would buy at the rendezvous, the American half-dime, the cast of the grizzly paw, the hats. The objects of the story become real now. There is a low buzz of excitement with each new object.

She talks about what it is like to be an author, about the winding path her life took to this work, about her own struggles as a child to read and write, about the way characters insinuate themselves into your mind and refuse to be ignored, about how she writes and rewrites, plans and revises, about how all the threads have to join in the fabric of the book and about going back to pick up a dropped stitch of plot when you find it. She demystifies the writer’s life and makes us all long for a wakeful night under a cottonwood to beckon us to put pen to paper.

She is real. She works hard at her craft. She is demanding of herself. She wonders. She lives surrounded by the “what” of her writing---taking on the persona of a Mexican woman at Bent’s Fort just before war breaks out with Mexico. She has explored the Southwest to be able to truly describe it. She gives new meaning to the word “research.” Somehow, copying the words from an encyclopedia article seems small and unworthy now.

Mrs. Finley autographs our classroom copies of her trilogy. The children cradle the books like treasures. They wistfully request that I purchase her next book for our classroom library, even thought it has not been published yet, and they know that they will not be here when it takes its place on our shelves.

When she is gone and the room is put back to its usual configuration, we muse upon our meeting. I tell my students that birders keep a life list of the species they have observed in the wild, but that I keep a life list of authors and illustrators whom I have met in person.

I tell them, “You have made your first entry on your own life list. Don’t you wonder what fascinating person will be your next entry?” There is an audible sigh. And then I say, “Maybe someday one of you will be an entry on my life list. I will feel so proud.” Shining eyes look toward the future---and they smile."


Vicki Heisler is a fifth-grade teacher at Meeker Elementary School.
November 1 , 2005: John Evans School, Greeley, CO.

"After seeing Mary Peace Finley's presentation at John Evans Middle School, several aspects of her visit had students longing for more. Students entered the library and after a brief introduction, Ms. Finley captivated the audience as she played her flute and read chapter one from Soaring Eagle. Students hung on every word and were amazed at the several artifacts she showed, each relating to the text.

Each group of students brought their own ideas and questions to the presentation. Ms. Finley valued each individual and always answered his/her questions, which guided the direction of the presentation. Her flexibility allowed students to explore her life experiences, books, and the writing process.

Ms. Finley emphasized the importance of following one's intuition and passion as she did at a young age and continues to do throughout her life. She encouraged students to always keep an open mind and to explore the world and life with enthusiasm. " Louise Price, Teacher

February 28, 2003: Remington Elementary, Denver, CO.

"Thank you so much for the wonderful visit at Remington. You held the students spellbound (not an east task at this school.) The kids were so excited about your visit and many have told me how much they enjoyed talking with you. Your talk really helped bring the story to life for the students and there has been an increase in the circulation of all your titles...So you know, students at Remington don't have as many extra special experiences as many other students, so your visit was a very special highlight for them." Cher, Information Media Specialist

February 25, 2003: Teachers-As-Writers, Running Creek Elementary, Elizabeth, CO.

"Mary, we all enjoyed your presentation so much! You gave us some new ideas and it made writing fun for us.Thanks for giving us the inspiration we needed to keep writing!" Kay, First Grade Teacher and writer